Thursday, 20 June 2013
My Poem
The Unknown
Inside our minds
is a universe crouching and hiding
never been opened
never been discovered.
They are hiding
they're awake
in a black hole watching us
hearing us but will never come out
Not for friends not for love not for stories.
Even if the black hole vanished
they will still be there hiding
waiting to be discovered
waiting every day of our lives.
watching every single thing we do.
What would it be
That they can’t show themselves
what is it that they can't show us
Would I understand it
would I be able to control it
to know what they are hiding.
Maybe there isn’t anything.
That I don't know
or maybe there is just one thing
that they are protecting.
It is there in our mind
every single person’s mind in the world
is like this.
Wednesday, 19 June 2013
Monday, 17 June 2013
Speech Assessment
L.I. - Present a formal speech
Introduction:
Captures your attention 0/5
Delivery:
Voice clarity / Pace 0/5
Volume 0/5
Posture / Eye contact 0/5
Content:
Topic is of interest to the audience 0/5
Meaning is clear 0/5
Ideas are presented in a logical order 0/5
Conclusion:
Summarises ideas 0/5
Leaves audience with something to think about 0/5
Personality projected in speech:
Enthusiasm 0/5
Total: 0/50
One thing I think I did really well was... Volume
An element of persuasive speech that I used was... ?
One thing to work on for next time is... eye contact
I need to complete my work on time.
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